soooo unexpected! i love it!
only comment i can give ya to improve
make the note to the newgrounds people last a bit longer, i couldnt read the original authors comment
(no, i dont see myself as part of newgrounds anymore.. i only come here when im bored to the extreme i got nothing else to do)
a 9, very good indeed
no, no 10, its not perfect. Nothing really is perfect.
definitly worth a place among the good flash pieces
it really is good...
heck, i dont even know what to comment on
even the singing was pretty tightly sync'd, and i reckon thats pretty hard to do
i saw one of the reviews, and had to look at some others
seriously though, the graphics werent that good
i play fantasy myself, but at least i know what the 40k models look like
pink horror... didnt see one
or was it the purple bugger? lol
the only model i reckognized was the space marine (the one that shot the screen)
oh well, ill give you some hints on how to make a animation from real models
- take out the big features of the model
* such as the shoulder pads and leg gaurds of the space marines
- add in smaller details to fill the model up
* dont overcrowd it, keep the details fairly simple
- use the most standard color scheme
* people get confused quickly
- if this doesnt work, use a older model
* such as the current pink horror and flamer of tzeentch, the 6th edition model is too complex and strange to draw nicely (or your really good) but if you look at the 4th edition models, such as the pink horror you will see a model that can be drawn fairly neatly (huge arms and hands, big head and everything else pretty small)
for the rest, dont make your movie so hyped
its too fast paced and nothing really makes sense
and like others said, add a storyline
and offcourse, its best to play fantasy =P muahahaha (slaanesh rulez! =P lol)
oh well, once your pretty good at drawing 40k.. start with something harder =P like drawing fantasy stuff =)
I know my stuff is a little fast paced, maybe I'll slow it down a bit. But I don't think I'm going to stoop down to taking pictures of models and using them to make a movie. I want to create my very own movie, not just cut and paste and tween. Thanks for the suggestions though. Always appreciated.
get some english lessons
it was decent
i myself dont like it
mainly because the english really is terrible...
but for the rest its pretty well made
the graphics are nice, even though you can see the different movie clips quite a number of times
but thats just minor stuff
somehow i think something went wrong...
i was invincible and the level didnt end (went off to take a shower and watch some tv afterwards, i came back after 45mins to an hour and it was still busy!! not even a boss on the screen!)
the graphics are kinda 'chunky' even though their pretty good..
they dont got smooth transitions or so
the sound? terrible, the sound of the gun gets annoying.. and the only other sound was some weird explosion
i just hope this was just my computer or so acting up
a week programming aye?...
looks more like 5mins...
make a button, when clicked increase a number by 1
make a enter frame action that decreases the amount by.. 1, 0.5 or whatever
and adjust the power bar...
the graphic, let it constantly loop, on the loop put a if that says to which state it goes (smaller then 20 = frame1, smaller then 40 but bigger then 20 = frame3 etc.)
now that was hard?
cmon, face it..
could be a bit better
thinking about using it in a game im making (without good music, a game is doomed to fail)
though the only glitch i can find about this lovely energetic music is...
it doesnt flawlessly loop..
for the rest, its a nice music
good energy flow
good fitting tunes
keep up the work :)
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