soooo unexpected! i love it!
only comment i can give ya to improve
make the note to the newgrounds people last a bit longer, i couldnt read the original authors comment
(no, i dont see myself as part of newgrounds anymore.. i only come here when im bored to the extreme i got nothing else to do)
a 9, very good indeed
no, no 10, its not perfect. Nothing really is perfect.
definitly worth a place among the good flash pieces
it really is good...
heck, i dont even know what to comment on
even the singing was pretty tightly sync'd, and i reckon thats pretty hard to do
i saw one of the reviews, and had to look at some others
seriously though, the graphics werent that good
i play fantasy myself, but at least i know what the 40k models look like
pink horror... didnt see one
or was it the purple bugger? lol
the only model i reckognized was the space marine (the one that shot the screen)
oh well, ill give you some hints on how to make a animation from real models
- take out the big features of the model
* such as the shoulder pads and leg gaurds of the space marines
- add in smaller details to fill the model up
* dont overcrowd it, keep the details fairly simple
- use the most standard color scheme
* people get confused quickly
- if this doesnt work, use a older model
* such as the current pink horror and flamer of tzeentch, the 6th edition model is too complex and strange to draw nicely (or your really good) but if you look at the 4th edition models, such as the pink horror you will see a model that can be drawn fairly neatly (huge arms and hands, big head and everything else pretty small)
for the rest, dont make your movie so hyped
its too fast paced and nothing really makes sense
and like others said, add a storyline
and offcourse, its best to play fantasy =P muahahaha (slaanesh rulez! =P lol)
oh well, once your pretty good at drawing 40k.. start with something harder =P like drawing fantasy stuff =)
I know my stuff is a little fast paced, maybe I'll slow it down a bit. But I don't think I'm going to stoop down to taking pictures of models and using them to make a movie. I want to create my very own movie, not just cut and paste and tween. Thanks for the suggestions though. Always appreciated.
its still legal to have a gun for shooting on targets, you just need a permit...
dont ask me how to get one, i just know their quite hard to get...
for the movie,
it might be an idea to switch from sprite to normal graphics
because everything else is good enough as it is :)
for starters, its not 1.07mb in size
its 1.04mb (do know that there is 1024! kb in a mb)
for the rest it isnt that great either
the animation looked really.. unorganic
static body while the legs and arms move just dont look that great...
the drawing style on the other hand is challenging
so.. good luck!
this isnt good, not at all!!
god i hate it when people say something like..
"Dont vote on this if you dont like it!! so just vote 5!!"
really, this was crap
the worst possible sound ever!
the sticks werent even that bad
just that frikkin music!
You submit something to the newgrounds people, not to a select audiance
so dont expect a select audiance to view it
dont get this review wrong, im not trying to be hatefull..
i was just tryin to let somebody know that you cant submit to just a part of newgrounds -.-
ow ow ow kruip in een hoekje en ga huilen ofzo ! jezes tereng ! iedereen heeft ze eigen muziek smaak en er staat toch echt dat als je niet van rock hou dat je dan gewoon NIET stemt !
maarja aan de score te zien valt het allemaal wel mee hoe kut iedereen het vind hahaha >:)
some things kinda ruined it
some things you shouldve let out or changed:
- the clocks, they just dont fit in with the art style of the background and stuff! you can do better (like the old geezer in there)
- the car sprites, the same as the clocks
only the cars looked worse...
- the gore, a bit more detail instead of a single color
does make it fit in with the style more..
for the rest, its good...
Keep it up
like i said to a few reviewers i'm pretty new to this and i will get better, i know the cars wernt the best but i wanted to finish the movie and i'm not really good at drawing them, but in future i will draw my own, and clocks dont have to only be put in a cartoony background u know, but thanks for the review :)
dont get me wrong, i didnt like this
but i dont score ya on me liking it
Music complements the graphics
Good pace, not too slow not too fast
It was fairly black/greysih.. fits the name perfectly
I really couldnt score you less :)
I really thought this movie should be reviewed by some moderators or admis...
So i blew the unsuitable whistle with a VERY CLEAR note that i dont know any other way to attract moderator attention on newgrounds
because i think this animation would fit it perfectly!!!
My friend, it already is official. Thanks, anywho. I just hope you won't lose whistle points now, that makes me a sad Dini =(
this needs some work
it goes too fast
and most of the animations look a little chunky (probably because of the fast pace on a low framerate)
for the rest it wasnt that original either...
It started original though
good luck on improving this!
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